homework0927
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Hi Logan! Thank you for doing your homework! I like your stand on this matter; find proofs to prove your innocence no matter what it takes! I would probably do the same. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I\'ll find the proofs that can prove my innocence.
>>I\'ll find proofs that can prove my innocence.
If I didn\'t do that, I belive there are some proofs somewhere.
>>If I can\'t find any, I\'ll try to probe more because I believe there could be proofs somewhere.
And find some witness too.
>>And, I\'ll find some witnesses too.
I think it\'s hard because I was accused by someone.
>>Correct
If I can afford the money, I\'ll find a lawyer who can help me.
>>Correct
I don\'t know about legal problems so I need some expert\'s help.
>>I don\'t know about legal matters, so I need some experts\' help. OR
>>I\'m not so familiar with legal matters, so I would seek some expert advice.
But If I can\'t afford the money to the laywer, I\'ll appoint a public lawyer.
>>But, if I can\'t afford the money for a lawyer, I\'ll seek help from a public lawyer.
I was told that a public lawyer is more cheaper.
>>I was told that a public lawyer is much cheaper.
And I\'ll talk to my family and get some advice.
>>Correct
As you know, It will be hard to me.
>>As you know, It will be hard for me.
So I have to care my mind.
>>So, I have to clear my mind.
So If there\'s no proof, I\'ll threaten the person who accused me.
>>But, if there\'s no proof, I\'ll threaten the person who accused me.
I\'ll said to him or her \"Say the truth in the court\".
>>I\'ll say to him or her; \"Say the truth in the court!\"
But I think it\'s the best way to go to jail. So I won\'t do that. :)
>>Correct OR
>>But I think, I will be putting myself in more trouble, so I won\'t do that.
Ps. I hope your headache getting better quickly.
>>PS. I hope your headache is gone and you feel better. (Thank you! ^ ^ I\'m feeling better now.)
I have a question. What\'s the difference of evidence and proof?
>>I have a question. What\'s the difference between evidence and proof? (Actually, they can be used interchangeably or they are synonymous. A slight difference is that evidence refers to pieces of information or facts; proof is the conclusion after studying the evidence/s)
And I want an extra homework because I couldn\'t do it yesterday.
>>And I want an extra homework because I didn\'t have any homework yesterday.
Can you give it for me?
>>Can you give it to me? (Sure thing! I will give you 2 sets of homework today ^ ^)
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