homework0927

2018-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I'll find the proofs that can prove my innocence. If I didn't do that, I belive there are some proofs somewhere. And find some witness too. I think it's hard because I was accused by someone. If I can afford the money, I'll find a lawyer who can help me. I don't know about legal problems so I need some expert's help. But If I can't afford the money to the laywer, I'll appoint a public lawyer. i was told that a public lawyer is more cheaper. And I'll talk to my family and get some advice. As you know, It will be hard to me. So I have to care my mind. So If there's no proof, I'll threaten the person who accused me. I'll said to him or her "Say the truth in the court". But I think it's the best way to go to jail. So I won't do that. :) Ps. I hope your headache getting better quickly. I have a question. What's the difference of evidence and proof? And I want an extra homework because I couldn't do it yesterday. Can you give it for me?

강사 첨삭

Hi Logan! Thank you for doing your homework! I like your stand on this matter; find proofs to prove your innocence no matter what it takes! I would probably do the same.  ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I\'ll find the proofs that can prove my innocence.

>>I\'ll find proofs that can prove my innocence.

If I didn\'t do that, I belive there are some proofs somewhere.

>>If I can\'t find any, I\'ll try to probe more because I believe there could be proofs somewhere.

And find some witness too.

>>And, I\'ll find some witnesses too.

I think it\'s hard because I was accused by someone.

>>Correct

If I can afford the money, I\'ll find a lawyer who can help me.

>>Correct

I don\'t know about legal problems so I need some expert\'s help.

>>I don\'t know about legal matters, so I need some experts\' help. OR

>>I\'m not so familiar with legal matters, so I would seek some expert advice.  

But If I can\'t afford the money to the laywer, I\'ll appoint a public lawyer.

>>But, if I can\'t afford the money for a lawyer, I\'ll seek help from a public lawyer. 

I was told that a public lawyer is more cheaper.

>>I was told that a public lawyer is much cheaper.

And I\'ll talk to my family and get some advice.

>>Correct 

As you know, It will be hard to me.

>>As you know, It will be hard for me.

So I have to care my mind.

>>So, I have to clear my mind.

So If there\'s no proof, I\'ll threaten the person who accused me.

>>But, if there\'s no proof, I\'ll threaten the person who accused me. 

I\'ll said to him or her \"Say the truth in the court\".

>>I\'ll say to him or her; \"Say the truth in the court!\"

But I think it\'s the best way to go to jail. So I won\'t do that. :)

>>Correct OR

>>But I think, I will be putting myself in more trouble, so I won\'t do that.



Ps. I hope your headache getting better quickly.

>>PS. I hope your headache is gone and you feel better. (Thank you! ^ ^ I\'m feeling better now.)

I have a question. What\'s the difference of evidence and proof?

>>I have a question. What\'s the difference between evidence and proof? (Actually, they can be used interchangeably or they are synonymous. A slight difference is that evidence refers to pieces of information or facts; proof is the conclusion after studying the evidence/s)  

And I want an extra homework because I couldn\'t do it yesterday.

>>And I want an extra homework because I didn\'t have any homework yesterday.

Can you give it for me?

>>Can you give it to me? (Sure thing! I will give you 2 sets of homework today ^ ^)

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