homework1
학생이 쓴 원문
-Where is your hometown?
My hometown is Ulsan, and it is located in southeastern Korea.
-Do you live in a city or rural area?
Now I live in a city, Seoul, because of my job location.
-Do you like living in your hometown? Why?
I like living in my hometown, Ulsan.
Because I actually don’t really like city-life and Ulsan is not so busy as Seoul.
But it is a metropolitan city too,
So there are many convenient facilities, and I can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the mountains, the river and the sea in one city.
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-How do people get around in your hometown?
There is no subway in Ulsan, so people who want to get around can take a bus, taxi or drive their own car.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for the answers. Please review the corrections that I would write. Well done!
~Elica~
-Where is your hometown?
>>CORRECT
My hometown is Ulsan, and it is located in southeastern Korea.
My hometown is Ulsan, and it is located in southeastern Korea.
>>My hometown is Ulsan and it is located in Southeastern Korea.
-Do you live in a city or rural area?
-Do you live in a city or rural area?
>>CORRECT
Now I live in a city, Seoul, because of my job location.
Now I live in a city, Seoul, because of my job location.
>>I live in the city of Seoul now because it is my job\'s location.
-Do you like living in your hometown? Why?
-Do you like living in your hometown? Why?
>>CORRECT
I like living in my hometown, Ulsan.
I like living in my hometown, Ulsan.
>>CORRECT
Because I actually don’t really like city-life and Ulsan is not so busy as Seoul.
Because I actually don’t really like city-life and Ulsan is not so busy as Seoul.
>>I actually don\'t like the city- life very much but Ulsan is not as busy as Seoul.
But it is a metropolitan city too, o there are many convenient facilities, and I can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the mountains, the river and the sea in one city.
But it is a metropolitan city too, o there are many convenient facilities, and I can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the mountains, the river and the sea in one city.
>>It is a metropolitan city too, so there are many convenient facilities and I can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the mountains, the river and the sea in one city.
-How do people get around in your hometown?
-How do people get around in your hometown?
>>CORRECT
There is no subway in Ulsan, so people who want to get around can take a bus, taxi or drive their own car.
There is no subway in Ulsan, so people who want to get around can take a bus, taxi or drive their own car.
>>CORRECT
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