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2012-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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1. Why does Mr. [Name] tell the boys to rip the pages out of the book? What is he trying to teach them? Mr. [Name]'s ideas of poetry were different from Mr. J. Evans Pritchard's. Therefore, Mr. [Name] tell the boys to rip the pages. Mr. [Name] said, to sustain life, we need an alignment like medicine and law. However, poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for. For this reason, Mr. [Name] thought poetry can't be evaluated. In short, Mr. J. Evans Prichard mesured poetry's greatness after calculating it's perfection and importance, but Mr. [Name] considered we cannot calculate and mesure poetry, so he tried to teach the importance of on theire own contemplation. 2. According to Mr. [Name], why is poetry important? According to Mr. [Name], poetry is important because it is what we stay alive for. Mr. keating wanted that the students think and talk more freely, so he tell the students to rip the entire introduction.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for entrusting me to check your homework. I hope I am not late in sending my correction. See you! T.Sheela 1. Why does Mr. [Name] tell the boys to rip the pages out of the book? What is he trying to teach them? Mr. [Name]\'s ideas of poetry were different from Mr. J. Evans Pritchard\'s. >> correct! Therefore, Mr. [Name] tell the boys to rip the pages. Mr. [Name] said, to sustain life, we need an alignment like medicine and law. >> Therefore, Mr. [Name] told the boys to rip the pages. Mr. [Name] said,\" to sustain life, we need an alignment like medicine and law.\" However, poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for. >>However, poetry, beauty, romance and love are what we stay alive for. >>OR: However, poetry, beauty, romance and love are the reasons why we are living. For this reason, Mr. [Name] thought poetry can\'t be evaluated. >>Correct! >>OR: With this reason, Mr. [Name] thought that poetry can\'t be evaluated. In short, Mr. J. Evans Prichard mesured poetry\'s greatness after calculating it\'s perfection and importance, but Mr. [Name] considered we cannot calculate and mesure poetry, so he tried to teach the importance of on theire own contemplation. >>In short, Mr. J. Evans Prichard measured poetry\'s greatness after calculating it\'s perfection and importance, but Mr. [Name] considered that we cannot calculate or measure poetry, so he tried to teach the importance of there own contemplation. 2. According to Mr. [Name], why is poetry important?According to Mr. [Name], poetry is important because it is what we stay alive for. Mr. keating wanted that the students think and talk more freely, so he tell the students to rip the entire introduction. >>According to Mr. [Name], poetry is important because it is what we are staying alive for. Mr. [Name] wanted the students to think and talk more freely, so he told the students to rip the entire introduction.

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