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1.In fact,I don't understand the meaning of "What do you love to see?". There is not a expression like that in Korea. ^^ Anyway, nowdays what I love to see is to see a my daughter. When I'm so tired after work or so gloomy for a cerntain things, my daughter makes me happy. Because she is growing up everyday beyond recognition.

Hi [이름],

Happy Monday!

The question is simply asking what you love to look at. And you answered it perfectly. I bet your daughter is so cute!

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- Teacher Grace

1.In fact, I don't understand the meaning of "What do you love to see?".

>>Correct
There is not a expression like that in Korea. ^^

>>There isn’t an expression like that in Korean.
Anyway, nowdays what I love to see is to see a my daughter.

>>Anyway, nowadays, what I love to see is my daughter.
When I'm so tired after work or so gloomy for a certain things, my daughter makes me happy.

>> When I'm so tired after work or so gloomy for certain things, my daughter makes me happy.

Because she is growing up everyday beyond recognition.

>>Correct