Homework1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Gladys! Thank you for the effort to do your homework. You did great and you didn\'t sound nervous in the class that we had yesterday so don\'t worry. And I will be helping you out and will be wil[이름]g to answer any questions you have. It is also great to know about night life in your city. I hope we can talk more about this in class. Good Job for today\'s homework! Keep it up! Below are some corrections you should take note of and be careful with your punctuations, spacing and capitalization. Thank you.
-Teacher Sandy-
Hi Sandy~ I\'m Gladys. Nice to meet you,too!
>> Hi Sandy! I\'m Gladys. Nice to meet you too.
I was so nervous because it was my first class.
>> Correct.
But I could understand because you explained english to me easily ;)
>> But I could understand because you explained English to me easily.
Nightlife in my city is very fun.
>>Correct.
People drink and hang out here at night!
>> People drink and hang out here at night.
Also many people visit the cafe at night. They spend their time with their friends or family!
>> Also many people visit the cafe at night. They spend their time with their friends or family.
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