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well.. I don\'t know well about fire alert in Australia. I just heard that it keep burning until now. So I think it is a very big disaster. So I just looked for satellite images because I want to know how big this is. And I think it looks like big red spot in earth. So I really hope that situation gets better soon for all of us, especially, for Australian.
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Hi [이름] Su!
Great to read your thoughts about the topic.
Do you know that almost half billion of wild animals were brunt to death during the massive fire?
I saw some photos on Facebook about some Koalas who are running for their lives but couldn\'t save themselves.
Anyway, here are the corrections.
well.. I don\'t know well about fire alert in Australia.
>> Well, I don\'t know well about fire alert in Australia.
I just heard that it keep burning until now.
>> I just heard that it keeps burning until now.
So I think it is a very big disaster.
>> So, I think it is a very big disaster.
So I just looked for satellite images because I want to know how big this is.
>> So, I just looked for satellite images because I want to know how big this is.
And I think it looks like big red spot in earth.
>> And I think it looks like a big red spot in the earth.
So I really hope that situation gets better soon for all of us, especially, for Australian.
>> So, I really hope that this situation gets better soon for all of us, especially, for Australians.
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