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2020-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Q. In this growing pandemic, what message would you like to give to the people who are affected by the Coronavirus? A. I would like to say that we can get over the pandemic together. So long as we abide by the rules of social distancing and wearing masks, bright days will come in no time. So we shouldn\'t be relieved for the situation of getting fewer confirmed cases. It was no more than three days after when we felt relieved and started going out that suddenly more than 100 confirmed cases occurred in the party in Itaewon. I want to put emphasis on saying that \"It\'s not over until it\'s over\". To get over this pandemic throughout the world, we need to keep aware of the disease and follow the rules so that we can make the bright days come as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing such kind and inspiring words, Bo Mi. ^^ 
I am looking forward to your future compositions.


~T. Ally



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I would like to say that we can get over the pandemic together. 
>> CORRECT!

So long as we abide by the rules of social distancing and wearing masks, bright days will come in no time. 
>> So as long as we abide by the rules of social distancing and wearing masks, bright days will come in no time. 

So we shouldn\'t be relieved for the situation of getting fewer confirmed cases. 
>> So we shouldn\'t be relieved by the situation of getting fewer confirmed cases. 

It was no more than three days after when we felt relieved and started going out that suddenly more than 100 confirmed cases occurred in the party in Itaewon. 
>> CORRECT!

I want to put emphasis on saying that \"It\'s not over until it\'s over\". 
>> CORRECT!

To get over this pandemic throughout the world, we need to keep aware of the disease and follow the rules so that we can make the bright days come as soon as possible.
>> CORRECT!

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