[Homework1]How can we live longer?
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Hello [이름]!
Hats off to you! I totally agree with you! There has been a lot of methods that experts suggested in releasing stress. Which one is the best for you? How are you capable of releasing your stress in an instant? That is something we should talk about next time. Have a great day!
~Teacher Eunice ^^
I know, everyone want to know about this answer or solution.
>> I know everyone wants to know about the answer or solution for this question.
I think most important solution for long lifetime is control of the stress.
>> I think the most important solution for living a longer life is to control being stressed out.
The stress is the biggest issue for modern people.
>> Stress is the biggest issue for modern people.
Our technology and skill is growing more and more.
>> Our technology and ability are improving rapidly.
But, I heard the number of patient to go to mental hospital is also increasing.
>> But, I heard the number of patients going to the mental hospital is also increasing.
The health of the mind is related with the physical health.
>> Mental health is related to the physical health of a person.
If our mind is sick, our body also become sick within a few days.
>> If our mind is sick, our body also becomes sick within a few days.
So, if we want to live as long as possible, we have to find own way to release the stress in our life.
>> So, if we want to live as long as possible, we have to find our own way to release stress in our lives.
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