Homework10
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Me and my girlfriend have hiked mountains this year.
>>CORRECT!
>>I and my girl friend have trekked mountains this year.
It was really hard but we can\'t forget the day.
>>CORRECT!
>>It was tough but remarkable.
I haven\'t seen a documentary.
>>CORRECT!
I watched a movie with my girlfriend last weekend on Saturday.
>>CORRECT!
>>I have watched a movie with my girlfriend last weekend on Saturday.
The movie is about police and drug.
>>CORRECT!
>>The movie is about policemen and drugs.
It was hilarious.
>>CORRECT!
My family have the reunion one or second of every year.
>>My family have reunion once or twice every year.
I think Korea social is very busy so there are not many korea family\'s family gathering.
>>I think Korean people are very busy so there are no many family gathering.
>>I think there\'s no much Korean socialization so it\'s rare to have family gathering.
Of course,my best hobby is soccer.
>>Of course, the best hobby that I like is soccer.
>>Of course, my favorite hobby is soccer.
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