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Hi Logan! Thank you on your thoughts with this one. But I have to disagree with you on the last part where you think the earth is just fine as it is. ^ ^
We borrow Earth from our children. This advice prods us to consider the future, and not to focus on the present or on the past. Instead of living just for today and gratifying our own immediate needs, we should think about how our current actions will affect the planet in the future generations who will live on it. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Short meaning of that sentence is we have to save the Earth and keep the Earth well for our next generations.
>>In other words, the sentence means that we have to save the Earth and keep the Earth well for the next generations.
And it means we also borrow the Earth from our parents.
>>And it also means that we borrowed the Earth from our parents too.
After the Industrial Revolution, the Earth was getting worse quickly.
>>Correct
So, we have many problems when it comes to Earth pollution.
>>Correct
For example, we\'ve got cancer which did not exist.
>>For example, we\'ve got cancer which did not exist before.
And a lot of animals are going extinct.
>>Correct
Air and water are getting worse.
>>Correct
I read some articles about environment problems.
>>Correct
They predict to raise the sea level.
>>They have predicted that sea level will rise.
If these conditions are continue to future, our childeren can\'t survive.
>>If these conditions continue to the future, our children won\'t survive.
So people think about eco-freindly policy.
>>So people think about some eco-friendly policies.
In my opinion, it\'s not enough.
>>Correct
But sometimes I think it\'s not my own business.
>>Correct or
>>But sometimes I think it\'s not my business.
Because I think present Earth is good enough.
>>Because I think, the Earth at the present is quite good enough.
I have to correct my thinking.^^
>>Correct
PS. Thanks for your kind feedback! I sometimes confused when I use \"the\" befor a noun. I think it use in specific stuff like I mentionted.
>>PS. Thanks for your kind feedback! I am sometimes confused when to use \"the\" before a noun. I think it use in a specific way like I mentioned.
Here are some uses of \"the\" before a noun.
-used before nouns to refer to particular things or people
example: The shirt was pretty expensive, but the shoes weren\'t.
-used before some nouns that refer to a place
example: We spent all day at the beach.
-used before a singular noun to refer to all the things or people
example: The panda is becoming an increasingly rare animal.
-used before some nouns referring to musical instruments
example: Nico is learning to play the piano.
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