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Hi Logan! A Happy Friday to you! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^ Actually, you gave me a very good and well thought answer. ^ ^

If we look at paintings in the past, \"voluptuous\" and well nourished woman was the ideal figure, but it has changed over the years; from voluptuous to sexy and to skinny.  People mostly look at beauty as fair skin, slim body, green eyes etc. People with dark skin or not thin body are still looked down upon by some people. 

Hope we will soon be able to erase the specific beauty standards validated by some people and will start to look at the beauty of the heart rather than the face. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

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Because it\'s not my interest.

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But I heard that fat people was a handsome and beautiful person who was live long time ago.

>>But I heard that a long time ago, people who were fat were regarded as handsome and beautiful.

It was a symbol of a rich person.

>>It was a status symbol for a rich person.

At that time, only rich people could eat a lot.

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So it was an important factor of marriages.

>>So it was an important factor for marriage. 

In west area, I was told a thin waist was a symbol of beauty.

>>In western areas, I was told than having a thin waist was a symbol of beauty. 

So many women wore a corset.

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They even died because of corset.

>>They even died because of wearing it. 

It made her rib broken.

>>It broke their ribs.

Nowadays, in women\'s case, they love their red lip, white face, and big eyes.

>>Nowadays, women like their lips red, eyes big and they like their faces white. 

Men wear a suit because many women like that.

>>Men wear suits because a lot of women like that.

Actually, I have no idea about beaty because it\'s not my interest.

>>Actually, I have no idea about beauty because it\'s not my interest.  (correct sentence, only typo error with \"beauty\")

I think we have to love ourselves the way we are.

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External beauty is not important.

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You know many girls go on a severe diet.

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>>A lot of girls go on an extreme kind of diet. 

They sometimes eat only a banana in a day.

>>They sometimes only eat a banana in a day.

It\'s not good for our health.

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