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Hi Logan! A wonderful day to you! I had a great weekend, I hope you had a great one too! ^ ^ Thank you for taking the time in accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! I could just imagine your faces when some stranger was knocking at your door and you guys thought was a criminal! Little did you realize that someone was knocking because you were too noisy and causing disturbance! ^ ^ But of course, like what you have said, you were young. You were controlled more with your emotions and imagination rather than your logic. I can\'t blame you for that! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I went to an amusement park which is called Everland when I was 20.

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It is the biggest amusement park in Korea.

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There were lots of flowers, rides, and snacks.

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We went there in summer so many fans which splashed water to us.

>>We went there in summer, so there were many fountains that splashed water to us. (I hope this is what you meant in your sentence.) 

There was one of the sleepest roller coaster in the world.

>>The amusement park has the steepest roller coaster in the world.

I was scared and I couldn\'t ride it.

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Instead of it, I rode a rides which was for children.

>>Instead of it, I rode rides which were for children. 

I\'d like to say why I never forget that place.

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We went to there at open time and we left there at close time.

>>We went there at the opening time and left at the closing time. 

So we stayed there for 13 hours!

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After we left Everland, we went to an accomodation and we drank a lot and yelled.

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Soon after, somebody knocked our door.

>>Soon after, somebody knocked at our door. 

We were scared because we were young and we tought the stranger could be a criminal.

>>We were scared because we were young and we thought the stranger could be a criminal. (correct sentence, only you misspelled \"thought\".)

>>We were scared because we were young and we thought that the person knocking could be a criminal.

We couldn\'t reply to the person who kncked.

>>We couldn\'t reply to the person who was knocking.

And we stayed silently.

>>And we stayed silent.

As you can expect, we got a complaint from next door guests.

>>As you can expect, we got a complaint from the next door guests.

It was a funny experience to us.^^

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