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This is explicit, [이름]!

Thanks for dropping by the board! Truly, smartphones can make our life convenient in some ways, but let us not maximize the use of it. Let\'s learn how to control ourselves, or else we would be under the spell. Great thoughts!

It\'s hard to choose between spicy chickens and a smart phone.

>>> It\'s hard to choose between spicy chicken and a smartphone.

For me, a smart phone is better than chickens.

>>> For me, a smartphone is better than chicken.

I always spend my time to use my smart phone in my free time.

>>> I always spend my time using my smartphone in my free time.

As you know, I love watching Youtube videos.

>>> correct!

I use my smartphone to study English too! And using a smart phone app is easy to transfer my money to my friends accounts.

>>> I use my smartphone to study English, and it is also helps me transfer money to my friends\' accounts easily.

Even bank commission fee is free!

>>> Even the bank commission fee is free!

And I love calling with my friends.

>>> I love calling my friends over the phone. 

It\'s not common to me but if my freind call to me, I usually call with her for 2 hours.

>>> It\'s not common for me, but if my friend calls me I usually talk to her for 2 hours.

I mean I don\'t like to call to my friend but I like to receive a call from my friend.

>>>  I mean I don\'t like calling my friend, but I like receiving a call from her/him.

Do I look a smart phone addict?

>>> Do I look like a smartphone addict?

>>> OR: Am I a smartphone fanatic?

I think so too but I believe there are many people like me.

>>> correct!

>>> I think so, and I believe that there are more smartphone fanatics like me.

(Smart phone fanatic!)

>>> Smartphone fanatics!

Do you like using your smartphone in your free time too?

>>> correct!

Can I ask you what did you do in your free time?

>>> Can I ask if what do you do in your free time?
 PS.

>>> P.S.

Happy Tuesday teacher!

>>> correct!

I want you to know about our lesson.

>>> correct!

>>> OR: I want you to know about our class.

I renewed my class so we can talk for 30 minutes since October 19!

>>> I renewed my class, so we can talk for 30 minutes from October 19.

I\'m really looking forward to Friday\'s class.^^

>>> correct!

See you tomorrow.

>>> correct!