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2023-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Please answer the question: Are computer games/online games good for relieving stress? Why? Answer: Computer games is interesting So, it’s reduce in my stress But, Sometimes Strange people give me a stress Because, they are make me I don’t play the game and they are have no manners

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Please answer the question:
Are computer games/online games good for relieving stress? Why?

Answer: Computer games is interesting

>> Computer games are interesting.

OR >> Playing computer games is interesting.

So, it’s reduce in my stress

>> So, it reduces my stress.

But, Sometimes Strange people

>> But sometimes, strange people give me stress because they are the ones that make me stop playing the game.

give me a stress

>> But sometimes, strange people give me stress because they are the ones that make me stop playing the game.
Because, they are make me I don’t play the game and they are have no manners

>> Also, they don\'t have manners.

OR >> Also, they are disrespectful.

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