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2024-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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I was interested in computing so I applied computing class to learn coding. I took the class in the last winter vacation. But that was my first time to do coding, and I feel lots of difficulties. I think coding was just like to learn other country\'s languages. After every class, I review the class and do coding alone in home. It was so hard to me, but after 1 month , I can do coding alone because I do coding every day in 1 month. I feel doing something steadily is best to improve my skills. I want to improve my English speaking skills like that experience.

강사 첨삭

I agree, Kate, that we need to do something consistently if we want to be good at it! ^^ Job well done! ^^

-Khai

I was interested in computing so I applied computing class to learn coding.

>> I was interested in computing, so I applied to a computing class to learn coding.

I took the class in the last winter vacation.

>> I took the class on my last winter vacation.

But that was my first time to do coding, and I feel lots of difficulties.

>> CORRECT

I think coding was just like to learn other country\'s languages.

>> I think coding is like learning other countries languages.

After every class, I review the class and do coding alone in home.

>> After every class, I review the lesson and do coding alone at home.

It was so hard to me, but after 1 month , I can do coding alone because I do coding every day in 1 month.

>> It was so hard for me, but after 1 month, I can do coding alone because I do coding every day for a month.

I feel doing something steadily is best to improve my skills.

>> CORRECT
OR
>> I feel doing something consistently is best to improve my skills.

I want to improve my English speaking skills like that experience.

>> I want to improve my English speaking skills too, like that experience.

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