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2012-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Escaping from the outline of education, he made the students think outside the box. According to this method, teacher could found student's potential ability, at the same time, some of the students also could see something inside themselves. This will help the students to find what they really want, and finally they'll do their best to get what they want. It means they can practice "Carpe Diem" spirit. 3. Are you a free thinker, a follower, or a leader? Are you a cynic, a realist, or a dreamer? Explain your character/personality. I'm a free thinker. A "free-thinker" is simply a term for someone who thinks for themselves and refuses to be a conformist. In the past, I thought I'm a follower. However, I found that I never agree with other people's opinion when their ideas were different from me. If I think I have an important and legitimate consideration, I have to say about that, and at that time, I think I turn into a leader for a moment. Because I feel confident of my idea.

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[이름], Here is the continuation of your homework. Please have time to read my corrections. See you later. T.Sheela Escaping from the outline of education, he made the students think outside the box. >>Correct! >>OR: By escaping from the outline of education, he made the students think outside the box. According to this method, teacher could found student\'s potential ability, at the same time, some of the students also could see something inside themselves. >>According to this method, teacher can find the student\'s potential, ability, and at the same time the students can see something inside themselves. >>OR: According to this method, teachers can discover the student\'s potential and ability. At the same time, the students can also evaluate themselves through this activity. This will help the students to find what they really want, and finally they\'ll do their best to get what they want. >> Correct! >>OR: In this way, the students are helping themselves to find what they truly want and do their best to achieve them. It means they can practice \"Carpe Diem\" spirit. >>Correct!3. Are you a free thinker, a follower, or a leader? Are you a cynic, a realist, or a dreamer? Explain your character/personality.I\'m a free thinker. >>Correct! A \"free-thinker\" is simply a term for someone who thinks for themselves and refuses to be a conformist. In the past, I thought I\'m a follower. >> A \"free-thinker\" is simply a term for someone who thinks for themselves and refuses to be a conformist. In the past, I thought I was follower. >>A \"free-thinker\" is a term used for someone who only thinks about themself and refuses to be a conformist. In the past, I thought I was a follower. However, I found that I never agree with other people\'s opinion when their ideas were different from me. >> However, I found out that I can never agree with other people\'s opinion especially if their ideas were different from me. If I think I have an important and legitimate consideration, I have to say about that, and at that time, I think I turn into a leader for a moment. >>If I think I have an important and legitimate consideration, I have to say it, and at that time, I think I turned into a leader for a moment. >>OR: If I think I have an important and legitimate consideration to say, I say it and at that time, I turned into a leader. Because I feel confident of my idea. >> Correct! >>OR: Because I feel confident of my ideas.

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