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2.As a result there is few advantage of hosting G20 summit. As you know, the cost of hosting G20 summit is astronomical. But the result of G20 summit is very disappointed for me. Korea as a chairman countary released "Guideline for 4% current account".It means if a current account surplus of Korea is over 4%, we have to buy goods of US. Typically Korea has Export-oriented industrialization strategies and Industry of Korea has developed sharply throughout 80's~90's until finacial crisis in '97. Even though economic growth rate of Korea has slowed, it's unreasonable to limit 4% of current account surplus. In conclusion, this G20 summit confirmed prominent status of US.

Hello again [이름],

Though I wasn't able to thoroughly keep up with the news on the G20 summit, I was able to read in some economic forums

that most Korean industrialists are not very satisfied with the total outcome.

You made a good point!

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Enjoy the week!

-Teacher Grace

2.As a result there is few advantage of hosting G20 summit.

>>There are a few advantages of hosting the G20 summit.
As you know, the cost of hosting G20 summit is astronomical.

>> As you know, the cost of hosting the G20 summit is astronomical.

But the result of G20 summit is very disappointed for me.

>> But the result of the G20 summit is very disappointing for me.

 Korea as a chairman countary released "Guideline for 4% current account".

>>Korea, as the host country released "Guideline for 4% current account"

It means if a current account surplus of Korea is over 4%, we have to buy goods of US.

>> It means if the current account surplus of Korea is over 4%, we have to buy goods from US.

Typically Korea has Export-oriented industrialization strategies
and Industry of Korea has developed sharply throughout 80's~90's until finacial crisis in '97.

>> Typically, Korea has export-oriented industrialization strategies
and the industry of Korea has developed sharply throughout 80's~90's until the financial crisis in '97.

Even though economic growth rate of Korea has slowed, it's unreasonable to limit 4% of current account surplus.

>> Even though the economic growth rate of Korea has slowed, it's unreasonable to limit 4% of current account surplus.

In conclusion, this G20 summit confirmed prominent status of US.

>> In conclusion, this G20 summit confirmed the prominent status of the US.