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2019-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

학생이 쓴 원문

Today\'s class was really fun,Sandy! Your essay is a wonderful word for me. Thank you so much. The place I will never forget is the beach in Thailand. There is clean sea water and pretty fish! I went there when I was young, but I will never forget there. Forever! Bye. See you tommorow Sandy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that.
I will talk to you tomorrow!
Take care!

T. Sandy

Today\'s class was really fun,Sandy!

>>correct
Your essay is a wonderful word for me.

>>correct

Thank you so much.

>>correct
The place I will never forget is the beach in Thailand.

>>correct
There is clean sea water and pretty fish!

>>correct
I went there when I was young, but I will never forget there. Forever!

>>I went there when I was young but I will never forget that place.

Bye. See you tommorow Sandy.

>>Bye! See you tomorrow Sandy.

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