Homework2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. Are you afraid of the dark? Why or why not?
A1. I\'m afraid of the dark.
As severe crimes increasing, I\'m worried about the safety of the crime in the dark.
I fear for the situation that I might be suffered by the crime.
Even though CCTV and street lights are almost everywhere to prevent crimes, but I still feel unsafe in the dark.
So I try not to walk the street alone and to drive a car at night.
It is important to always be aware of the safety by myself.
I hope that the crimes will decrease and people can go anywhere feeling safe in the dark.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo Mi. ^^
As severe crimes increasing, I\'m worried about the safety of the crime in the dark.
I fear for the situation that I might be suffered by the crime.
Even though CCTV and street lights are almost everywhere to prevent crimes, but I still feel unsafe in the dark.
It is important to always be aware of the safety by myself.
I hope that the crimes will decrease and people can go anywhere feeling safe in the dark.
Thank you for being so open.
I appreciate your efforts in making a composition! ~~
I hope crimes in your area will be lessened soon.
~t. Ally
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I\'m afraid of the dark.
>> CORRECT!
As severe crimes increasing, I\'m worried about the safety of the crime in the dark.
>> As severe crimes are increasing, I\'m worried about my safety from crimes in the dark.
I fear for the situation that I might be suffered by the crime.
>> I fear that I may suffer from such a crime.
Even though CCTV and street lights are almost everywhere to prevent crimes, but I still feel unsafe in the dark.
>> Even though CCTV and street lights are almost everywhere to prevent crimes, I still feel unsafe in the dark.
So I try not to walk the street alone and to drive a car at night.
>> CORRECT!
It is important to always be aware of the safety by myself.
>> It is important to always be aware of my safety.
I hope that the crimes will decrease and people can go anywhere feeling safe in the dark.
>> CORRECT!
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