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2012-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

At the same time, I'm a realist and I'm never a cynic. If there is some hope available, I'll challenge. If there's a defining purpose, I'll do my best as long as I can. However, it doesn't mean that I'm a dreamer. If my dream is an unrealizable thing, I can scrap my dream.

강사 첨삭

[이름], I hope you will get a high score from this homework again. See you tomorrow. Get well soon! T.Sheela At the same time, I\'m a realist and I\'m never a cynic. >> At the same time, I\'m also a realist and I have never been a cynic. If there is some hope available, I\'ll challenge. >> If there is some hope available, then It will be my challenge. >>OR: If there is some hope left, then it will be my challenge to solve it. If there\'s a defining purpose, I\'ll do my best as long as I can. >> Correct! >>OR: If there is a definite reason, I will do my best as far as I can. However, it doesn\'t mean that I\'m a dreamer. >> Correct! If my dream is an unrealizable thing, I can scrap my dream. >>If my dream is unrealizable , I can scrap my dream. >> If my dream is unreachable, then I will scrap my dream.

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