Homework3
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher Sheela-
3. Do you admire Carlie\'s daring stunts? Why or why not?
At least, on some level, I admire him.
>>Correct.
However, I can say that his daring stunts were definitely wrong.
>>Correct.
His actions could put his friends at risk. Especially in Welton highschool.
>>Correct.
OR>>His actions could put his friends at risk especially Welton High School.
Therefore, he had to think twice before he published his article in the school paper, but at least, I can trust what he said that he\'ll take full responsibility for what he did.
>>Correct.
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