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2016-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Hi Teacher SOPHIA! Happy tuesday. Last Saturday me and my parents visited a farm. We had a special experience like feeding a cow, made a cheese and milk icecream. We had a lovely day trip. and I have a question about last Friday's homework. 1. Choose the best definition of Render. a. list b. deliver c. measure d. label you said the answer is b.deliver I know about Render means make and deliver means like a carry. so.. I couldn't understood about that. can you explain a example sentence about render and deliver? 1. There were many dogs in the park. One dog was _a__ Dalmatian. 2. Pandas and ___ tigers are both endangered animals. 3. She is wearing _a__ blue dress with red earrings. 4. Hawaii is _an__ island in the Pacific Ocean. 5. Christmas comes once _a__ year. 6. _An__ ant is _a_ insect. 7. The Nile is _a__ river. 8. I went to the shop to get _a__ bread. 9. He broke _a__ glass when he was washing dishes. 10. You should take _an__ umbrella.

강사 첨삭

Hello SUNNY,

I will explain your question in our class for you to easily understand. 

Please remind me about this. 

Teacher Sophia 

Here are your corrections:

Hi Teacher SOPHIA!

>> 
Happy tuesday.

>> Happy Tuesday!
Last Saturday me and my parents visited a farm.

>> Last Saturday, my parents and I visited a farm.
We had a special experience like feeding a cow, made a cheese and milk icecream.

>> We had a great experience. We fed the cow, made cheese and milk ice cream.
We had a lovely day trip.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: We had a wonderful trip.

Here are your corrections:

1. There were many dogs in the park. One dog was _a__ Dalmatian.

>> CORRECT 
2. Pandas and ___ tigers are both endangered animals.

>>  CORRECT 
3. She is wearing _a__ blue dress with red earrings.

>>  CORRECT 
4. Hawaii is _an__ island in the Pacific Ocean.

>>  CORRECT 
5. Christmas comes once _a__ year.

>>  CORRECT 
6. _An__ ant is _a_ insect.

>>  _An__ ant is _an_ insect.
7. The Nile is _a__ river.

>> CORRECT   
8. I went to the shop to get _a__ bread.

>>  NOTHING
9. He broke _a__ glass when he was washing dishes.

>>  CORRECT 
10. You should take _an__ umbrella.

>>  CORRECT 


1. A
2. NOTHING
3. A
4. AN
5. A
6. AN, an
7. A
8. NOTHING
9. A
10. AN

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