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2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi teacher Sandy. Today\'s class was so funny! I will study hard english with you ;) Thank you Sandy. This is the song I listen to when I hang out with my freinds is \"Paris in The Rain\". This song was sung by \"Lauv\", It is a really sweet and calm song~ His voice like angel :) I want you to listen to that song. And~~~I made a setence I couldn\'t make in class. \'I haven\'t paid my rent yet\' Happy holiday Sandy. See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi Gladys! Thank you very much for the effort in answering the homework for today.  I had fun in class today too. I will be glad to help you out in class too so just feel free to ask questions and continue learning and doing a good job. Below are some corrections to help you improve. Thank you and have a nice day too.

-Teacher Sandy-

Hi teacher Sandy. Today\'s class was so funny! I will study hard english with you ;) Thank you Sandy.

>> Hi teacher Sandy.  Today\'s class was so fun. I will study English hard with you. Thank you Sandy.
 This is the song I listen to when I hang out with my freinds is \"Paris in The Rain\".

>> This is the song I listen to when I hang out with my friends it is \"Paris in The Rain\".
 This song was sung by \"Lauv\", It is a really sweet and calm song.

>>This song was sung by \"Lauv\", It is really a sweet and calm song.
 His voice like angel :) I want you to listen to that song.

>> His voice is like an angel and I want you to listen to that song.
 And~~~I made a setence I couldn\'t make in class.

>>And I already have a sentence for the one I was not able to make in class
 \'I haven\'t paid my rent yet\'

>> I haven\'t paid my rent yet.
 Happy holiday Sandy. See you tomorrow!

>> Correct.

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