Homework3
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Gladys! Thank you very much for the effort in answering the homework for today. I had fun in class today too. I will be glad to help you out in class too so just feel free to ask questions and continue learning and doing a good job. Below are some corrections to help you improve. Thank you and have a nice day too.
-Teacher Sandy-
Hi teacher Sandy. Today\'s class was so funny! I will study hard english with you ;) Thank you Sandy.
>> Hi teacher Sandy. Today\'s class was so fun. I will study English hard with you. Thank you Sandy.
This is the song I listen to when I hang out with my freinds is \"Paris in The Rain\".
>> This is the song I listen to when I hang out with my friends it is \"Paris in The Rain\".
This song was sung by \"Lauv\", It is a really sweet and calm song.
>>This song was sung by \"Lauv\", It is really a sweet and calm song.
His voice like angel :) I want you to listen to that song.
>> His voice is like an angel and I want you to listen to that song.
And~~~I made a setence I couldn\'t make in class.
>>And I already have a sentence for the one I was not able to make in class
\'I haven\'t paid my rent yet\'
>> I haven\'t paid my rent yet.
Happy holiday Sandy. See you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
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