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Q. Who is the greatest person you have ever met?- (^-^)
A. When I saw the word “greatest person,” I recalled the many celebrity of Korea who I have met.
And I thought there were two person as the best for me.
First person is the Min Gyeonghun who is the popular singer in korea.
He is a member of the BUZZ and I love this band, these guys.
I met him at a college campus festival and his concert.
It really incredible experience for me.
And other person is the Jang Beomjun who is the popular singer too.
I met him when I didn\'t care him.
But after I listened to him voice, I knew his value.
I told just about celebrity, but greatest person for real is my mom.
I always respect her as either my mom or her achievement.
She is very special mom under god for me.
The reason is too much so I can\'t explain that. But it\'s really true. right?
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts too! ^^ I totally agree with you. I guess the best person in the world would be our mothers! ^ ^ They are incomparable! They are simply the best! ^^ Enjoy your weekend! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I saw the word “greatest person,” I recalled the many celebrity of Korea who I have met.
>>When I saw the word “greatest person,” I recalled the many celebrities of Korea that I have met.
And I thought there were two person as the best for me.
And I thought there were two person as the best for me.
>>And I thought there are two great persons for me.
First person is the Min Gyeonghun who is the popular singer in korea.
First person is the Min Gyeonghun who is the popular singer in korea.
>>The first person is Min Gyeonghun who is a popular singer in Korea.
He is a member of the BUZZ and I love this band, these guys.
He is a member of the BUZZ and I love this band, these guys.
>>Correct
I met him at a college campus festival and his concert.
I met him at a college campus festival and his concert.
>>I met him at a college campus festival during his concert.
It really incredible experience for me.
It really incredible experience for me.
>>It was really an incredible experience for me.
And other person is the Jang Beomjun who is the popular singer too.
And other person is the Jang Beomjun who is the popular singer too.
>>The other person is Jang Beomjun who is also a popular singer.
I met him when I didn\'t care him.
I met him when I didn\'t care him.
>>When I met him, I didn\'t care much about him.
But after I listened to him voice, I knew his value.
>>But after hearing his voice, I realized how good he was.
I told just about celebrity, but greatest person for real is my mom.
But after I listened to him voice, I knew his value.
>>But after hearing his voice, I realized how good he was.
I told just about celebrity, but greatest person for real is my mom.
>>I only mentioned celebrities, but the greatest person for me is my mom.
I always respect her as either my mom or her achievement.
I always respect her as either my mom or her achievement.
>>I always respect her as my mom and so with her achievements.
She is very special mom under god for me.
She is very special mom under god for me.
>>She is a very special Mom and it\'s such a blessing to have her.
The reason is too much so I can\'t explain that. But it\'s really true. right?
The reason is too much so I can\'t explain that. But it\'s really true. right?
>>Correct
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