Homework4

2019-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Sandy. I\'m a little late becaause I was so busy today. Your essay makes me think a lot. You meant \"Don\'t preview\"? or \"Enjoy your life without thinking too much\"? Which one is right? I will wait for your answer. If I travel anywhere in the world, I want to go to Rome. Because that place is really wonderful and It\'s a must-visit place!

강사 첨삭

Hi Gladys! Thank you very much for always participating in class and doing your homework. To answer your question Gladys the correct one is \"Enjoy life without thinking too much.\" I hope I have answered your question. Thanks and have a great day.

-Teacher Sandy-

Hi Sandy. I\'m a little late becaause I was so busy today.

>> Hi Sandy. I am a little late because I was so busy today.
 Your essay makes me think a lot.

>> Your essay questions makes me think very well.
 You meant \"Don\'t preview\"? or \"Enjoy your life without thinking too much\"?

>> Did you mean \"Don\'t preview\" or \"Enjoy your life without thinking too much?\"
 Which one is right? I will wait for your answer.

>> Correct.
 If I travel anywhere in the world, I want to go to Rome.

>>If I could travel anywhere in the world I would go to Rome.
 Because that place is really wonderful and It\'s a must-visit place!

>>Because Rome is really a wonderful place and it is a must-visit place.

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