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2019-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1.seoul and busan are fairly big city in Korea. 2.it is very humid after rainning. 3.i am gonna travel so I am looking for accommodation. 4.can you describe your girlfriend? 5 they had complained me about anything when I coach children yesterday soccer class.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher Lucy


1.seoul and busan are fairly big city in Korea.

>>Seoul and Busan are fairly big cities in Korea.


2.it is very humid after raining.

>>CORRECT!

>>The environment is surrounded by moist after the rain.


3.i am gonna travel so I am looking for accommodation.

>> CORRECT!

>>I\'m going to travel so I\'m booking for an accommodation.


4.can you describe your girlfriend?

>>CORRECT!

>>Tell me something about your girlfriend.


5. they had complained me about anything when I coach children yesterday soccer class.

>>They have complained something when I coached the children yesterday\'s soccer class.

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