Homework5
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I don\'t think I usually chat with my friends on SNS, becuase me and my friends are not really into SNS especially for chating. We use SNS for neccessary chating or just swiping. But Using Instagram is easier to chat with my friends. When we swipe Intagram and find something funny or silly shorts, we just share each other that post on DM, and we just comment there like \"That one is soooo funny !\" That\'s our common chatting haha. I think it\'s not really useful but we still keep in touch from that stuff. After comment, we ask like \"Stop watching silly video, btw how are you doing?\" Somehow Instagram shorts link our relationship.
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Hi, [이름]^^
I think that\'s a normal case in most circle of friends.
My friends and I do the same, so we usually start talking about the videos or posts before catching up. kk
_T. SHAY^^
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I don\'t think I usually chat with my friends on SNS, becuase me and my friends are not really into SNS especially for chating.
>>I don\'t think I usually chat with my friends on SNS, because my friends and I are not really into SNS especially for chatting.
We use SNS for neccessary chating or just swiping.
>>We chat only when necessary, and we usually use it to surf the internet.
But Using Instagram is easier to chat with my friends.
>>But Using Instagram is easier to chat with my friends.
I think that\'s a normal case in most circle of friends.
My friends and I do the same, so we usually start talking about the videos or posts before catching up. kk
_T. SHAY^^
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I don\'t think I usually chat with my friends on SNS, becuase me and my friends are not really into SNS especially for chating.
>>I don\'t think I usually chat with my friends on SNS, because my friends and I are not really into SNS especially for chatting.
We use SNS for neccessary chating or just swiping.
>>We chat only when necessary, and we usually use it to surf the internet.
But Using Instagram is easier to chat with my friends.
>>But Using Instagram is easier to chat with my friends.
OR: I prefer using Instagram to chat with my friends.
When we swipe Intagram and find something funny or silly shorts, we just share each other that post on DM, and we just comment there like \"That one is soooo funny !\"
>>When we scroll through Instagram and find something funny or silly shorts, we just share the share the video to each other. And we just comment there like \"That one is soooo funny !\"
When we swipe Intagram and find something funny or silly shorts, we just share each other that post on DM, and we just comment there like \"That one is soooo funny !\"
>>When we scroll through Instagram and find something funny or silly shorts, we just share the share the video to each other. And we just comment there like \"That one is soooo funny !\"
OR: When we see funny contents while browsing Instagram, we send it through DM and we talk about it.
That\'s our common chatting haha.
>>That\'s how we usually chat.
That\'s our common chatting haha.
>>That\'s how we usually chat.
OR: That\'s how we usually start chatting.
I think it\'s not really useful but we still keep in touch from that stuff.
>>I think it\'s not really useful, but we still keep in touch from that stuff.
I think it\'s not really useful but we still keep in touch from that stuff.
>>I think it\'s not really useful, but we still keep in touch from that stuff.
OR: It may not be educational but that\'s how keep in touch and keep our relationship.
After comment, we ask like \"Stop watching silly video, btw how are you doing?\"
>>After commenting, we say, \"Stop watching silly videos. By the way, how are you doing?\"
Somehow Instagram shorts link our relationship.
>>Correct
After comment, we ask like \"Stop watching silly video, btw how are you doing?\"
>>After commenting, we say, \"Stop watching silly videos. By the way, how are you doing?\"
Somehow Instagram shorts link our relationship.
>>Correct
OR: Somehow Instagram shorts help us keep our relationship.
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