Homework5
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What part of your history would you like to re-live today?
A1. I\'d like to re-live the day when I took an English class in the university. It\'s a shame that I didn\'t study English hard at that time. If I had studied harder, I could speak English more fluently now. I think that I have to learn English in my entire life. But through this opportunity I will brush up on my English hard so that I can communicate with people in English.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bo Mi. ^^
Thank you for sharing!
You\'re honestly improving so much even in the short span of time. ^^
~t. Ally
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I\'d like to re-live the day when I took an English class in the university.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s a shame that I didn\'t study English hard at that time.
>> CORRECT!
If I had studied harder, I could speak English more fluently now.
>> CORRECT!
I think that I have to learn English in my entire life.
>> I think that I have to learn English my entire life.
But through this opportunity I will brush up on my English hard so that I can communicate with people in English.
>> CORRECT!
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