Homework6
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1. Earthquakes cause a great deal with damage of life and property.
2. Earthquakes occur when plates on the crust of the earth move.
3. When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup in pressure.
4. Natural disasters are caused by nature.
5. Flood warnings will not prevent the floods in occurring.
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>>Earthquakes cause a great deal of damage to life and property.
2. Earthquakes occur when plates on the crust of the earth move.
2. Earthquakes occur when plates on the crust of the earth move.
>>Earthquakes occur when plates in the crust of the earth move.
3. When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup in pressure.
3. When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup in pressure.
>>When these plates get stuck, there is a buildup of pressure.
4. Natural disasters are caused by nature.
>>correct
5. Flood warnings will not prevent the floods in occurring.
5. Flood warnings will not prevent the floods in occurring.
>> Flood warnings will not prevent the floods from occurring.
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