homework6
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi my teacher Donna.
It is too long so I couldn\'t write all of my daily routine in this space.
So I will attach pdf files! Thank you
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jenny!
You are really smart! I did not know until today that the PDF file is accessible on this page. Thank you for sending the entire transcript of your daily routine here on this page.
Albeit you will not be able to tell all of these activities in the real speaking test due to time constraint, you will have a variety of ideas to choose from. You can divide the highlight of your day into three parts as what you do in the morning, afternoon, and night.
Below, the grammar suggestions include some uses of prepositions, capitalization, deletion of redundant words, and subject-verb agreement. Generally, all of your sentences are correct, congratulations! Very good!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> About 2 weeks ago, my summer vacation started. So these days, I don’t have to go school in the morning, I usually wake up around 8 am. The first thing I do is to turn off my alarm and check my phone to see if there are any important notifications.
After that, I go to the restroom and freshen up. And by then, I’m pretty much
ready to start my day.
So the first thing I actually study is English. I review and preview my mobile
english class, and then I receive a call from my teacher Donna.
>>> After that, I go to the restroom and freshen up. By then, I’m pretty much ready to start my day. So the first thing I actually study is English. I (review/ preview) my mobile English class, and then I receive a call from my teacher, Donna.
We talks for
about 20 minutes, and once the class i over, I start working on the homework
she gave me.
With a proud heart, I head out to my favorite brunch cafe, grab my meal to go,
come back home, and enjoy my lunch.
>>> We talk for about 20 minutes, and once the class is over, I start working on the homework she gave me. With a proud heart, I head out to my favorite brunch cafe, grab my meal to go, come back home, and enjoy my lunch. Very good sentences and transition!
After that delectable meal, I take a little
rest until around 1 pm.
When the clock hits 1, I start studying for my major certification exam. I do this
for about 5 hours straight. While I study, I love listening to jazz with no lyrics, it
really helps me focus.
>>> After that delectable meal, I take a little rest until around 1 pm. When the clock hits 1, I start studying for my major certification exam. I do this for about 5 hours straight. While I study, I love listening to jazz with no lyrics/ (instrumental jazz), it really helps me focus. Very good sentences!
After all that studying, I go to gym for HYROX training, which is about an hour,
and then I do a 3km recovery run with my workout buddies.
By the time I get back home, I take a shower and have some protein-based
dinner.
>>> After all that studying, I go to the gym for HYROX training, which is about an hour, and then I do a 3km recovery run with my workout buddies. By the time I get back home, I take a shower and have some protein-based dinner. Very good sentences!
Once I’m ready to go to bed, I get into my bedding and read a book before I fall
asleep. It’s my daily routine.
>>> Once I’m ready to go to rest, I lay on my bed and read a book before I fall asleep. It’s my daily routine.
Hi my teacher Donna.
It is too long so I couldn\'t write all of my daily routine in this space.
So I will attach pdf files! Thank you.
It is too long so I couldn\'t write all of my daily routine in this space.
So I will attach pdf files! Thank you.
>>> Hi my Teacher Donna.
It is too long so I couldn\'t write all of my daily routine in this space.So I will attach pdf files! Thank you.
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