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학생이 쓴 원문
Our country usually put the Bactrian flower’s nectar in my nails and swim in the beach. We also go trip to another country.
강사 첨삭
Hello Monica! Thank you for this. I\'ve always wanted to try the flower they use to dye the nails. It looks pretty.
- T. Beth
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Our country usually put the Bactrian flower’s nectar in my nails and swim in the beach. >>> In my country, we usually put the Bactrian flower’s nectar on my nails and swim in the beach.
Bongswonhwa (Garden Balsam in English), is a plant that they use to dye their nails.
We also go trip to another country.
>>> We also go on a trip to another country.
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