Homework6
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What videos do you like watching on Youtube? Why do you like watching them?
A1. I don\'t actually watch videos on Youtube. I only use Youtube when I listen to music every now and then. Instead of it, I use Netflix to watch movies and TV series. My favorite video that I watch these days is Korean TV series, the story of which is about doctor\'s life. I like the story because it is very touching and fun. I always look forward to new episode coming out on every Thursday.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bo Mi. ^^
Thank you for sharing.
I also like watching Korean dramas!
I\'d love to talk about it in class. ^^
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I don\'t actually watch videos on Youtube.
>> CORRECT!
I only use Youtube when I listen to music every now and then.
>> CORRECT!
Instead of it, I use Netflix to watch movies and TV series.
>> CORRECT!
My favorite video that I watch these days is Korean TV series, the story of which is about doctor\'s life.
>> My favorite kind of videos that I watch these days is a Korean TV series, the story of which is about doctor\'s life.
I like the story because it is very touching and fun.
>> CORRECT!
I always look forward to new episode coming out on every Thursday.
>> I always look forward to new episodes coming out on every Thursday.
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