Homework7

2016-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher SOHPIA Monday is come back again Time passed so fast. I saw you searched a new house. I hope you find a home as soon as possible. Anyway, How was your weekend? I did a short part time job on holliday. I asked to people to fill out a form(questionnaire) about art exbihition. Before I started work, I thought it will be very easy. But I knew in a moment it was my mistake, as many people refused my attempt. So weekend was ilttle hard for me. And I thought about when I had a really fun. it's been too long, and I completely agree about Number1. I really worried what other people will think about me. So I removed a Facebook, much better than before.. Other people don't think about me nearly as much as I think they do. I know Its totally true.haha Now I will try to don't think about them. Thanks for tell me:) ANd I had a question about last homework I answered except would. Is it have a lot of different to using that? 1accept 2accept 3effect 4affect5have6have7its8it's9They're10there

강사 첨삭

Hello Sunny,

I didn\'t enjoy my weekend because we had a typhoon.

I just stayed home doing nothing because we had a power interruption. 

I\'m sorry to hear that you had a hard weekend. 

Let\'s talk about these things in our class.

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

Teacher SOHPIA

>> Teacher Sophia
Monday is come back again Time passed so fast.

>> It\'s Monday again.  Time flies like an arrow. 
I saw you searched a new house. I hope you find a home as soon as possible.

>> I know that you are looking for a house. I hope that you can find a house as soon as possible.
Anyway, How was your weekend? I did a short part time job on holliday.

>> Anyway, how was your weekend? I had a part time job on the holiday.
I asked to people to fill out a form(questionnaire) about art exbihition.

>> I asked the people to fill out a form about art exhibition.
Before I started work, I thought it will be very easy.

>> I thought it will be very easy before I started working.
But I knew in a moment it was my mistake, as many people refused my attempt.

>> I knew that it was difficult because many people refused to answer the questionnaire.
So weekend was ilttle hard for me.

>> So, my weekend is a little tough.
And I thought about when I had a really fun.

>> I was contemplating when was the last time I had fun. 
it\'s been too long, and I completely agree about Number1.

>> It\'s been a long time and I completely agree with number 1. 
I really worried what other people will think about me.

>> I\'m worried about what other people will think about me. 
So I removed a Facebook, much better than before..

>> As a result, I am not using Facebook anymore. 
Other people don\'t think about me nearly as much as I think they do.

>> Other people don\'t think about me more than I do. 
I know Its totally true.haha Now I will try to don\'t think about them.

>> I will try not to think about them neither.
Thanks for tell me:)

>> Thank you for telling me.
ANd I had a question about last homework

>> By the way, I have a question about the last homework. 
I answered except would. Is it have a lot of different to using that?

>> I answered except would, is there a difference in using that?

Here are your answers:

1accept

>> CORRECT 

2accept

>>  a. except

3effect

>>  CORRECT 

4affect

>>  CORRECT 

5have

>>  CORRECT 

6have

>>  CORRECT 

7its

>>  CORRECT 

8it\'s

>>  CORRECT 

9They\'re

>>  b. Their

10there

>>  CORRECT 



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