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학생이 쓴 원문
hello.
First, I usually drink coffee to stay awake at work.
before my pregnancy I had 2-3 cups of coffee a day. even in the weekend.
But now I just have one cup of coffee a day, in the morning.
So.I feel sleepy constinuously thesedays.
Second, Sometimes I walk around the office in order to stay awake.
Third, Sometime I also stare out over the windows, I stare at the sky for a while.
강사 첨삭
HELLO MS. [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
I am sorry to hear that you can\'t drink coffee nowadays.
I can\'t really start my day without a cup of coffee with me.
Anyway, enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
hello.
>> Hello!
First, I usually drink coffee to stay awake at work.
>> Hello!
First, I usually drink coffee to stay awake at work.
>> Firstly, I usually drink coffee to stay awake at work.
before my pregnancy I had 2-3 cups of coffee a day. even in the weekend.
before my pregnancy I had 2-3 cups of coffee a day. even in the weekend.
>> Before getting pregnant, I usually had 2 to 3 cups of coffee a day even in the weekend.
But now I just have one cup of coffee a day, in the morning.
>> But now, I just have one cup of coffee a day in the morning.
But now I just have one cup of coffee a day, in the morning.
>> But now, I just have one cup of coffee a day in the morning.
So.I feel sleepy constinuously thesedays.
>> I am always sleepy these days.
Second, Sometimes I walk around the office in order to stay awake.
>> Secondly, I sometimes walk around the office in order for me to stay awake.
Third, Sometime I also stare out over the windows, I stare at the sky for a while.
>> Secondly, I sometimes walk around the office in order for me to stay awake.
Third, Sometime I also stare out over the windows, I stare at the sky for a while.
>> Thirdly, I look outside the window to see the sky for a while.
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