Homework7
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. Do you believe dreams have a special meaning? Why or why not?
A1. I believe dreams have a special meaning. I think dream is a reflection of one\'s mind. When I have something worry about, I dream of being chased by someone. But I try not to believe superstition of dream. Because I have never won the lottery after dream of something that is regarded as a good meaning. So I think it depends on how my mental state is and I prefer to sleep without any dream, which means that my condition is stable.
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I believe dreams have a special meaning.
>> CORRECT!
I think dream is a reflection of one\'s mind.
>> I think dreams are a reflection of one\'s mind.
When I have something worry about, I dream of being chased by someone.
>> CORRECT!
But I try not to believe superstition of dream.
>> But I try not to believe in superstitions of dreams.
Because I have never won the lottery after dream of something that is regarded as a good meaning.
>> Because I have never won the lottery after dreaming of something that is regarded as a good meaning.
So I think it depends on how my mental state is and I prefer to sleep without any dream, which means that my condition is stable.
>> CORRECT!
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