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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about your graduation experiences. Enjoy the rest of the day. :)
sincerely,
Teacher Lucy
I can\'t forget in high school graduation.
>>I can\'t forget my high school graduation.
Because it is first day I was drank in my life.
>>Because it is the first day I was drank in my life.
After I graduated in primary school and middle school I always played soccer pratice because my dream.
>>After I graduated in primary school and middle school I always played and practiced soccer because it\'s my dream.
And after i graduated in high school i had gone to work for make money and then I graduated in college I started coaching.
>>And after I graduated in high school I had gone to work to make money and then, when I graduated in college I started coaching.
>>And after I graduated in high school I had gone to work for money and when I graduated in college I started coaching.
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