Homework9
학생이 쓴 원문
When I coached the children if they play well, I say It was splendid.
When i was in college i was broke.
Many forienger visitors visit in jeju island.
I can\'t accept his to apologize.
I have offered many food and drink alcohol but they have to pay little bit money
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름]!
Wow! Your composition is splendid. :)
regards,
Teacher Lucy
When I coached the children if they play well, I say It was splendid.
>>CORRECT!
>>The children are splendid when they play well.
When i was in college i was broke.
>>CORRECT!
>>I was broke when I was in college.
Many forienger visitors visit in jeju island.
>>CORRECT!
>>Jeju Island has a lot of foreigner visitors.
I can\'t accept his to apologize.
>>CORRECT!
I have offered many food and drink alcohol but they have to pay little bit money.
>>I have offered many food and alcohol but they have to pay.
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