homeworkfor today

2014-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Who in your life has been your biggest influence and why? There is no doubt that the most influential person is my mother. We have known each other quite long, my whole life, and talked various thing and sometimes fought than any other person. I believe since we share same DNA so we have a lot in common such as lifestyle, thought, speaking habit, etc. That makes us best friends. These days, we have been talked about my career path and future. She has had expectation about my career, but she allowes me to do whatever I want and encourages me. It makes me do what I like with confidence.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]!

A pleasant morning to you!

Thank you for answering your homework.

You did a great job but kindly read the corrections I made below especially on your grammar.

See you in class.

~~T. Mona

Who in your life has been your biggest influence and why?

There is no doubt that the most influential person is my mother.

>>Correct!
We have known each other quite long, my whole life, and talked various thing and sometimes fought than any other person.

>>I have known her my whole life. We talk about various things and sometimes we even fight more than any other people.
I believe since we share same DNA so we have a lot in common such as lifestyle, thought, speaking habit, etc.

>>I believe that since we share the same DNA,we have a lot in common such as lifestyle, thought, speaking habit,etc.

That makes us best friends.

>>Correct!
These days, we have been talked about my career path and future.
>>These days, we have been talking about my career path and future.
She has had expectation about my career, but she allowes me to do whatever I want and encourages me.
>>Correct!
It makes me do what I like with confidence.

>>This makes me do what I like with confidence.

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