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If I can make a person\'s situation better, I wna to do with my friend. Because my personality is timid so I can\'t take an active part. But, with my friends or another close person, I think I can gain courage.
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If I can make a person\'s situation better, I wna to do with my friend.
>> If I can make a person\'s situation better, I want to do it with my friend.
Because my personality is timid so I can\'t take an active part.
>> It is because, my personality is a bit timid so, I can\'t take an active part.
But, with my friends or another close person, I think I can gain courage.
>> But, with my friends or another with another close person to m, I think I can gain courage.
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