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Hi my dearest [이름]^^,
Thank you for always doing your homework!
I made some correction, please find time to review it!
Yes, I agree with you. I also think that having a healthy body and mind is the most important.
For your first wish, I know that you\'ll be able to get a job. Everything happens for a reason and things happen on the right time.
For your third wish, don\'t worry I will make you smile everyday!
See yu tomorrow!
May you have a great day and take care!
~T.Chelsea~
What are three wishes you have for your life?
If you could choose only one of these to come true, which would it be and why?
I have three wishes now that I get a job, healthy and smile in all my life.
>>I have three wishes now, first is to get a job, second is to be healthy and last is to always smile.
And I would choose healty that the most important thing in anyone\'s life.
>>And I would choose my second wish which is to be healthy because it is the most important thing in anyone\'s life.
If we don\'t have healty body and mind, we can\'t make anythings to do.
>>If we don\'t have a healthy body and mind, we will not be able to do a lot of things.
Healthy is the best property in my life.
>>Health is the best thing in my life.
>>OR: Health is the most important in y life.
Especially, service feilds what I want to do require healty body and mind as necessary condition.
Especially, in a service fields, what I want to have is a healthy body and mind in a good condition.
With my healty body, I can go to everywhere, do everything, make the future what I want. ^-^
>>With my healthy body, I can go anywhere, do everything and have the future that I want.
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