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학생이 쓴 원문
What's the most interesting part of your place? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I like amusement[이름] that make me interesting.
There are lots of rides and zoo.
I like to see turtles and lions.
And, I like to take hairy rides, too.
So, This place make me happy and excited.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about your favorite amusement [이름]? Where is it located? Tell me more about it in class.^^
~t. Kelly^^
What\'s the most interesting part of your place? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I like amusement[이름] that make me interesting.
>> I am interested in going to amusement [이름]s.
There are lots of rides and zoo.
>> There are lots of rides and zoo attractions there.
I like to see turtles and lions.
>> Correct.
And, I like to take hairy rides, too.
>> And, I like to take the hairy rides, too.
So, This place make me happy and excited.
>> So, this place makes me happy and excited.
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