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2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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If you could travel back in time, where would you go? If I could travel back in time, I would go to the time of twenty years of age. Because I'm regretful for what i had done. At that time, I was so depressed my life that i failed college-preparatory. So I spent my life to blame myself. I wouldn't enjoy my school life. That lives on the my memories with hurt. I think If I had have significant times, i be a better person more than now. But the past is in the past. I'm striving for my dreams that makes me more than better person.

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Hi there^^. Thank you for making your homework! You really did a great job expressing your ideas. Don\'t feel bad just bacause you made some mistakes in the past! Yes, I agree with you past is past! I think, we all commit mistakes and it\'s either we learn from it or not! Since you regret what happened in the past, you learned your lesson and next time you\'ll be more carefull. Always remember \"Everything happens for a reason\" Don\'t blame yourself! FIGHTING! T.Chelsea If you could travel back in time, where would you go?If I could travel back in time, I would go to the time of twenty years of age. >>If I could travel back in time, I will go to the time when I was twenty years old.Because I\'m regretful for what i had done. >>Because I regret the things that I did. >>OR: Because I\'m regretful about the things I did. At that time, I was so depressed my life that i failed college-preparatory. >>At that time, I was so depressed because I failed college-preparatory. So I spent my life to blame myself. >>So, I spent my life blaming myself. I wouldn\'t enjoy my school life. >>Do you mean \" I couldn\'t enjoy my school life\". That lives on the my memories with hurt. >>It\' still hurt, everytime I remember the memories I have.I think If I had have significant times, i be a better person more than now. >>I think that if I have significant times, I will be a better person now.But the past is in the past. >>But past is past. I\'m striving for my dreams that makes me more than better person. >>I\'m striving for my dreams that will make me a better person.  

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