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Have you ever been furious at work? If so,what made you feel that way?
I have been furious at work when I couldn't make it perfectly.
Because of my perfectionism, I often feel depression at work. If I can't come through work I assumed, I would like to give up everything I have to do.
On my tendency, I suffer from stress. I can not help changing my perfectionism for my comfortable life. I effort to relax and feel positive in my work.
T.chelsea~~ today's topic was so fun~~~ I love our class ^0^
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Hi there^^,
Thank you for doing your homework!!
Wow!! I\' really proud of you! Your grammar is improving..Keep it up!
Always start your day with a sile and for sure you will have a stress-free day!
I agree with you always stay positive no matter what!
Thank you!! You made me smile today!
I also enjoyed our class. I always enjoy talking to you!
Have a great day and take care
~T.Chelsea~
Have you ever been furious at work? If so,what made you feel that way?
I have been furious at work when I couldn\'t make it perfectly.
>>I have been furious at work, especially when I couldn\'t make it perfectly.Because of my perfectionism, I often feel depression at work.
>>because of my perfectionism, I often feel depressed at work.
If I can\'t come through work I assumed, I would like to give up everything I have to do.
>>If I couldn\'t do my work, I would like to give up everything that I have to do.On my tendency, I suffer from stress. I can not help changing my perfectionism for my comfortable life. I effort to relax and feel positive in my work.>>Tendency is that I suffer from stress and I can\'t change being perfectionist for having a comfortable life, that\'s why I try to relax and feel positive at work.T.chelsea~~ today\'s topic was so fun~~~ I love our class ^0^
>>CORRECT!
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