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학생이 쓴 원문
-Is it a good idea for a father to raise his children full-time? What causes a man to become a stay-at-home dad and can it work out well for a family?- (^-^)
I think that It does not matter who raise the children.
If a father cares and does better than a mother to raise their children, father can become a stay-at home dad.
The best chef is man and people who manufecture home appliances are also men.
I really agree with that a father raises his children like a house wife as long as a father can do better than a mother.
As I know, boys need father\'s strength and girls need mother\'s deliicacy.
It always causes same matters as long as one of parents raise their children.
I hope that a father and a mother help each other to raise their children.
강사 첨삭
Very well said [이름]! ^ ^ I totally agree with you. Raising children is a shared responsibility. It doesn\'t matter who as long as they do their best to raise good and responsible children! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think that It does not matter who raise the children.
>>I think that it does not matter who raises the children.
If a father cares and does better than a mother to raise their children, father can become a stay-at home dad.
If a father cares and does better than a mother to raise their children, father can become a stay-at home dad.
>>CORRECT
The best chef is man and people who manufecture home appliances are also men.
The best chef is man and people who manufecture home appliances are also men.
>>The best chef are men and people who manufacture home appliances are also men.
I really agree with that a father raises his children like a house wife as long as a father can do better than a mother.
I really agree with that a father raises his children like a house wife as long as a father can do better than a mother.
>>CORRECT
As I know, boys need father\'s strength and girls need mother\'s deliicacy.
As I know, boys need father\'s strength and girls need mother\'s deliicacy.
>>As I know, boys need father\'s strength and girls need mother\'s delicateness.
It always causes same matters as long as one of parents raise their children.
It always causes same matters as long as one of parents raise their children.
>>CORRECT
I hope that a father and a mother help each other to raise their children.
I hope that a father and a mother help each other to raise their children.
>>CORRECT
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