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1Q: How do you keep yourself from being bored?
A:umm When I feel bored, I always eat delicious food.with my family or friends. For example pizza, chicken you know?
And then we talked about all kinds. It relieves my stress sometimes I go to swimming pool, it’s my favorite hobby
2Q: What is the best way to cheer up someone who is feeling sad?
A: It’s listen she’s saying. And I’ll ask “why are you feeling sad? If I solve this? You know and then I’ll hug she “it’s okay everything will be okay Don’t worry “ I think it’s my best way to cheer up someone
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! Wow, that sounds really fun! I love how you spend time with your family and friends eating delicious food like pizza and chicken. It must be really enjoyable. Going to the swimming pool as your favorite hobby also sounds great! It seems like you have really good ways to relax and have fun. Also, your second story was really sweet. I love how caring you are, listening first, asking, and giving a comforting hug is such a thoughtful way to cheer someone up. I’m sure anyone would feel much better with you around!
-T. Sonny
Q1 Answer:
umm When I feel bored, I always eat delicious food. with my family or friends.
>>When I feel bored, I always eat delicious food with my family or friends.
For example pizza, chicken you know?
>>For example, pizza or chicken.
And then we talked about all kinds.
And then we talked about all kinds.
>>Then, we talk about all kinds of things.
It relieves my stress sometimes I go to swimming pool, it’s my favorite hobby
>>It relieves my stress. Sometimes, I go to the swimming pool, which is my favorite hobby.
Q2 Answer:
It’s listen she’s saying.
>>I listen to what she’s saying.
And I’ll ask “why are you feeling sad? If I solve this?
>>And then I ask, “Why are you feeling sad? Can I help you?”
You know and then I’ll hug she “it’s okay everything will be okay Don’t worry “
>>You know, and then I hug her and say, “It’s okay, everything will be fine. Don’t worry.”
I think it’s my best way to cheer up someone
>>I think this is the best way for me to cheer someone up.
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