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2020-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi! My birthday is on Semptember 20. I want to receive gift to my family but I was don\'t receive gift. So I\'ll want to receive anything. I had a dinner in the resturant with my family. They sang a birthday song for me. Thank you Gabby... You are very kind.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan,
Great job for today. Keep learning every day.
~Teacher Gabby
Hi!
>> Hi!
My birthday is on Semptember 20.
>> My birthday is on September 20.
I want to receive gift to my family but I was don\'t receive gift.
>> I want to receive a gift from my family but I didn\'t receive one.
So I\'ll want to receive anything.
>> So I still want to receive a gift.
I had a dinner in the resturant with my family.
>> I had a dinner with my family in a restaurant.
They sang a birthday song for me.
>> They sang a birthday song for me.
Thank you Gabby... You are very kind.
>> Correct.

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