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Hi. Erine^^
How's your weekend? I have been spending good time with my family
I am starting to get along with my husband^^
Lovers' quarrels are soon mended.ㅋㅋ
In Korea, It is not relative private school or public school.
Almost school students should wear uniforms in Korea.
It is rare not wearing school uniforms for students in Korea.
When I was student I didn't like wear uniform. But now I think that the students wear uniform are most pretty than other students.
Wearing uniform helps students feel sense of belonging. And we can save expense of buying clothing. In my experience, The time when I was wearing a uniform was my best days.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
You have sent two composition. I have checked now the first then I will do the other
one later.^^
Remember that when you are writing in English, punctuation marks are very important
so you have to be familiar with their usage.
See you later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi. Erine^^>> Correct.
How\'s your weekend? I have been spending good time with my family
How\'s your weekend? I have been spending good time with my family
>>Correct.
I am starting to get along with my husband^^
I am starting to get along with my husband^^
>>Correct.
Lovers\' quarrels are soon mended.ㅋㅋ
>> Correct.
In Korea, It is not relative private school or public school.
Lovers\' quarrels are soon mended.ㅋㅋ
>> Correct.
In Korea, It is not relative private school or public school.
>>In Korea, private and public schools are not related/similar.
Almost school students should wear uniforms in Korea.
>>Most students should wear uniforms in Korea.
It is rare not wearing school uniforms for students in Korea.
It is rare not wearing school uniforms for students in Korea.
>>Correct.
When I was student I didn\'t like wear uniform.
When I was student I didn\'t like wear uniform.
>>When I was a student, I didn\'t like wearing uniforms.
But now I think that the students wear uniform are most pretty than other students.
>>Correct.
Wearing uniform helps students feel sense of belonging.
Wearing uniform helps students feel sense of belonging.
>>Wearing a uniform helps students feel the sense of belonging.
And we can save expense of buying clothing.
>>We can also save money in buying clothes.
In my experience, The time when I was wearing a uniform was my best days
>>In my experience, the time when I was wearing a uniform were my best days.
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