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Christmas is getting near, what present do you want to receive and why?
What I most want to receive is a puppy. I really want to have a puppy since I was little kid. However, my mom scared of puppy, and she don't like smell of puppy. Also, we live in the apartment, it is hard to rear a puppy. My father always said, one day when we move in to the house where it has backyard, let's rear a dog. But it still didn't happend. I wish I can have a puppy , eventhough it is hard to come true.
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Hi, [이름]. Thank you for accomplishing your homework. :)
I love puppies as well, I actually have six puppies in my place.
Don\'t worry, maybe someday you can have one.
Just keep on believing and always be positive. :)
Happy Monday. :)
-T.Faye
Christmas is getting near, what present do you want to receive and why?>> CORRECTWhat I most want to receive is a puppy.
>> The present I want to receive this Christmas is a puppy.
I really want to have a puppy since I was little kid.
>> I really want a puppy since I was a little kid.
However, my mom scared of puppy, and she don\'t like smell of puppy.
>> But, my mom is scared of puppies and she doesn\'t like the smell of it.
Also, we live in the apartment, it is hard to rear a puppy.
>>Also, we are living in an apartment and it would be hard for us to have one.
My father always said, one day when we move in to the house where it has backyard, let\'s rear a dog.
>> My Father always says, one day when we move in a house with a backyrd maybe we an have one.
But it still didn\'t happend.
>> But, still, it didn\'t happen.
I wish I can have a puppy , eventhough it is hard to come true.
>>CORRECT
>> OR: I wish, I could have a puppy, even if, it is quite hard to come true.
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