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2013-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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T. Sheela Hi Sheela , here is my homework for Monday- quick question - Can I get a correction service for IELTS writing on Cambridge 8 , instead of the homework that you have provided? Because I need to have better score on writing , too. 1. At present, the rate of economic growth is very satisfactory, but ......... when foreign competition makes itself felt, this will not be the case. c) considerably 2. The study of the situation covers a great deal of relevant material, but does not tackle the real issues ........... enough. e) adequately 3. As the new field worker will be working in close ........... with several others, make sure you select someone with agreeable personality. c) collaboration 4. Serbian ......... in Bosnia has been strongly condemned by the civilised world, but little serious action has been taken against it c) treaty 5. Many of the pictures sent from outer space are presently on ......... in the public library. e) display

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A happy Tuesday morning!!

Thanks for doing your homework. Here\'s the corrections to it! Please review them.

About your favor, it could be but please remind me about it again in class because I might

forget about it..kkkk Thanks a lot!

Have a great day and see you in class!

T.Sheela

T. Sheela

>>T.Sheela,
Hi Sheela , here is my homework for Monday- quick question -

>>CORRECT!!

Can I get a correction service for IELTS writing on Cambridge 8 , instead of the homework that you have provided?
>>Can you please correct my IELTS writing on Cambridge 8, instead of giving me homework?
Because I need to have better score on writing , too.
>>Because I need to have a better score in writing too.
1. At present, the rate of economic growth is very satisfactory, but ......... when foreign competition makes itself felt, this will not be the case.
c) considerably

>>b.Eventually
2. The study of the situation covers a great deal of relevant material, but does not tackle the real issues ........... enough.
e) adequatel

>>CORRECT!! but spell it properly. (Adequately)
3. As the new field worker will be working in close ........... with several others,
make sure you select someone with agreeable personality.
c) collaboration

>> c. Suspicion
4. Serbian ......... in Bosnia has been strongly condemned by the civilised world, but little serious action has been taken against it
c) treaty

>>b. Conduct
5. Many of the pictures sent from outer space are presently on ......... in the public library.
e) display

>>CORRECT!!

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