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2012-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me. 2. She likes cooking food daily. 3. I will write a letter tomorrow. 4. I have been studing in this school for ten years. 5. I took the pen before she did. I have to do a lot of things. I mean to say I want to do a lot of things. But A day is very short. Time goes very fast. After work, I arrive my home at 7pm. I have diner, I clean my room, I wash the dishes, I watch TV a few minute... After the day goes by. I want to take exercise, to study English, to read a book, to practice the flute... I can't do anythings right.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework for today.. Job well done on yourcomposition my dear.. I made some modifications on your composition, read and study the following: Talk to you again my dear.. Teacher Cam   1. I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me.>>correct!2. She likes cooking food daily.>>correct!3. I will write a letter tomorrow.>>correct!4. I have been studing in this school for ten years.>>correct!5. I took the pen before she did.>>correct!I have to do a lot of things. >>correct!I mean to say I want to do a lot of things. >>correct!But A day is very short. >>But one day is very short.Time goes very fast. >>correct! >>Time flies.After work, I arrive my home at 7pm. >>After work, I will arrive home at 7 pm.I have diner, I clean my room, I wash the dishes, I watch TV a few minute... >>I will eat my dinner, clean my room, wash the dishes, and watch TV for a few minutes.After the day goes by.>>Then time goes by..I want to take exercise, to study English, to read a book, to practice the flute... >>correct!I can\'t do anythings right. >>I can\'t do anything right.  

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