homewortk &
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me.
2. She likes cooking food daily.
3. I will write a letter tomorrow.
4. I have been studing in this school for ten years.
5. I took the pen before she did.
I have to do a lot of things.
I mean to say I want to do a lot of things.
But A day is very short.
Time goes very fast.
After work, I arrive my home at 7pm.
I have diner, I clean my room, I wash the dishes, I watch TV a few minute...
After the day goes by.
I want to take exercise, to study English, to read a book, to practice the flute...
I can't do anythings right.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework for today..
Job well done on yourcomposition my dear..
I made some modifications on your composition, read and study the following:
Talk to you again my dear..
Teacher Cam
1. I am doing my work now. Do not disturb me.>>correct!2. She likes cooking food daily.>>correct!3. I will write a letter tomorrow.>>correct!4. I have been studing in this school for ten years.>>correct!5. I took the pen before she did.>>correct!I have to do a lot of things.
>>correct!I mean to say I want to do a lot of things.
>>correct!But A day is very short.
>>But one day is very short.Time goes very fast.
>>correct!
>>Time flies.After work, I arrive my home at 7pm.
>>After work, I will arrive home at 7 pm.I have diner, I clean my room, I wash the dishes, I watch TV a few minute...
>>I will eat my dinner, clean my room, wash the dishes, and watch TV for a few minutes.After the day goes by.>>Then time goes by..I want to take exercise, to study English, to read a book, to practice the flute...
>>correct!I can\'t do anythings right.
>>I can\'t do anything right.
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